Review for Ron Gets Wrecked (By Hagrid)

Ron Gets Wrecked (By Hagrid)

(#) lilgenious 2011-04-27

Oksy so I read all your stories and found that they are all classified as trainwrecked. However being the nice person I am I am going to leave a review for this story and maybe offer some useful advice.

This story that I read didn't really make sense, and I am sad to say that none of the other stories do as well. In a onesot I have to admit that they are very rushed and that is why I end up having multi chapters:( I fail at oneshots miserably.

Don't take this as flamming please: But I do think that in order to get more reviews to your stories is to actually create one that makes sense. One that doesn't have to sound so horrible (I am sorry!), but maybe I should explain myself more. Because this story had a jumble of ideas it made it sound horrible and it didn't really make any sense.
Also have you tried fanfiction.net? They have a Harry Potter fandom and if you posted your stories there then there would be a lot of authors willing to help you out. (I read your profile and found out that you were on another fanfiction site so I decided to ask that).
Before you post a story, I find that it helps to read over the story and edit any mistakes and see if it makes sense. I also find that feedback on the story really helps as well and it is a shame that not one of your stories ever got any reviews on it to give you the helpful advice that you need.

Author's response

dear lilgenious,
first of all its spelled genius,
and unless your username is some name ive never heard spelled genious i think it's safe to assume you can't spell your way out of a paper bag.
your review was not in any way constructive and you completely failed to see the point of our story, everything was extremely vague and you didn't allude to anything in the story that could help us improve. and i know that our story was well written and grammatically correct so the only reason you wouldn't be able to understand it is 1. your an illiterate idiot or 2. English is not your first language. our story was a satire on the ridiculous fanfiction that so many teenage girls write that are horribly written and the only reason they exist is to release their pent up horny frustrations. our story was meant to be comedic and entertaining and we are insulted that you would scrutinize it so badly, then again you have to take things that idiots say with a grain of salt.