I love this story. I like how you have threaded everything together and I look forward to reading the rest of this story. The research you have done on the construction of the lightsabers, the forms and katas, mixing technology and magic believably, and following character development is golden. You have even made the M.O.B. a believable bad guy.
Thank you.
Author's response
Thank you, tammin,
It was over a year of hard work, and a lot of research. I believe strongly in details. A few of my reviewers had noticed details I've missed, but that's what makes this fun.
I also believe in character development. It prevents disasters like HBP and DH.
Some think I went too far with Dumbledore , but I've read worse portrayals. Here, I believe I've kept him within his canon personality, if only just.
Thanks for the review.
Alorkin