Your story if frickin awesome! Like, how you link everything together and not forget about details (i think). yeah... Please update! It's one of the best stories I've read in a while
Author's response
Hey
thanks so much for the great comment! It makes me smile getting such positive feedback :D
And Im glad ur noticing the details and stuff. I tend to write more like an actual book than short stories.
I'll update when I can, hopefully soon :) just hang in there, the chapters take a while to get out cos theyre so long