Review for JEDI POTTER


(#) KenF 2011-05-02

I guess letting the enemy capture you is pretty much a standard Jedi trick?

It took me a while to figure out what you were going to do with Ron, but now that it's out there, the foreshadowing is obvious.

Good stuff!

Author's response

Hello, KenF.

Well, it seems to have worked for Obi-Wan and Luke, so why not Harry?

I hated to kill him off, and i rewrote the scene several times making him look better each time, but it was actually written many months ago.

As you said, there were several clues.

Thanks for the review.