Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) zamia 2011-05-05

Hope this isn't a repeat. PC playing up. Excellent to see Dummbles have to suffer the two things he fears the most, lack of magic & lack of fame. May he suffer eternally. Thank God Ron wasn't in the SEAL's who did the right thing to get ObL the other day. I think Luna had already foreseen this and at least kept a small part of him. It was so easy to take Voldie out that way. The lack of real action would have stunned all the DEs and gave them that little element of surprise. A great victory with small collateral damage. Very enjoyable chapter. Cheers.
Z

Author's response

G'day, Zamia!

Nope, not a repeat.

Poor poor Dumbley, has to face the consequences of his actions.

Excuse me. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!

Thank you.

Having been a SEAL, I'd have to say if any of my teammates acted like that in combat I'd have killed him myself. The mission is too important for grandstanders. Fortunately the SEAL's are one of the most disciplined special forces in the world, behind only the SpetzNaz and on a par with the SAS/SBS.

I normally don't rejoice in the death of another, but in the case of Bin Laden, I think I can make an exception.

Luna: Yes she did. that's why she brewed the fertility potion. She wanted him to live on and so volunteered her own body to make that happen.

If the Deez were stunned, howd'ya think Voldy felt?

"Hmmm! I wonder how this workBZZZZZZZZZZ!"


Element of surprise: Quite honestly there should have been more casualties for the good-guys. It was only the Death Eater's lack of knowledge about what they were facing, their overconfidence in their own image, and the Jedi student's intensive training over the past year that prevented it from being a disaster.

Next one is the end of this story. Until then...

Alorkin