this is amazing. The ending was perfect and you wrote the semi-sex thing so sweetly. It was so passhionate and loving i really liked this....wait rephrase that loved it. This is so going into my favourites i loved it all makes a change from reading the same old high school frerards. I agree, maybe draging it out might loose it's elagance and spark. Keeping thsi as it is, is more than amazing :)
this is incredibly epic haha :P
your so great at writing keep up the ab work.
choawwi chaz
chazom
xx
Author's response
Thank you! I made a favorite? No way! :D Ahh, I'm so excited.
I'm glad it wasn't typical and it was something you enjoyed reading. :D
I'll be writing soon more!