Review for Audtions please help!!

Audtions please help!!

(#) Mistaken-Vampire 2011-05-17

who do you want to be :the mystery person (if any ) other wise a confused good guy.
killjoy name: Vexed Vampxie
Real Name: Jo
personality:quirky, outlandish and always the one in trouble even if they havnt done anything wrong. Clumsy but mysterious to others that dont know her.
looks:medium height, red ruffled hair, tribal dragon tatoo on left hip and cresent moon up my right arm from wrist with small blue stars swirling round it.pale skin.chameleon eyes that change colour from blue to green and now and then grey.
talents:making people talk when they dont want to and confusing people whilst she escapes.
erason for becoming a killjoy:ran away from her family because they wanted her to calm down and be normal and she couldnt handle it.They went on to train her only other friend to be a drac and she went almost schizo after.Wanted to make her mark on the world by getting rid of all the people who made her get mucked up in the head. The dracs.
Mask or no mask: tribal facepaint in bright colours down the left side of her face.
weapon:a bright orange ray gun and a flouresent yellow lser pen that disracts others.
likes:bright and wierd things.Getting rid of the evil in the world that makes her unhappy.
dislikes:dracs, being surounded y haters.

hope this is ok.Can't wait to hear the story.