I just want to say I started this story maybe a week or two ago. I haven't stopped reading it since. You are an amazing writer, sometimes I forget i'm reading a story posted on a fanfic website and think I'm reading am actual book! No lie! And! You don't let what you want to happen get in the way of what would actually happen in real life. That's really tough for some people to do, including me. Then again, I'm not an especially good writer and I've abandoned several of my fanfictions....
Still, you are very talented and you should definitely keep writing!