FicWad

On behalf of lilgenious: This author is not stupid and can spell themself out of a paper bag. lilgenious is a pen name and is original, I don't think that this author much cares about the spelling of a pen name. By the way that is a common spelling mistake by the French. The French and I don't mean this to be rude but a lot of non English people, especially from France do not spell that word correctly. They spell it through word of mouth or the way it is spelled in French. However I think that lilgenious is exhibiting expression and personality.

Besides all this the review this person left had a lot of constructive and a lot of praises. Things like "It is a shame that not one of your stories ever got any reviews on it." That means that despite the things this person said that they still enjoyed the story and were giving you some advice. Advice that you turned on lilgenious by calling this person stupid and just for a pen name! Plus English is NOT this person's first language and you should be made aware of this... even though her stories are written in English and they are well written for that matter she still has difficulties in the English language and I should know that because I know her personally and help her out whenever I can. However seeing as she moved back to her country I can't really help her now can I?

Now onto the story: I agree with lilgenious on this one, it was a bit confusing. However I enjoy your creativity and how well thought out the story was. It sounded a bit rushed to me as well where you sped up the ending and all but other than that there is nothing wrong with it:) Is there going to be any more? Maybe you should write more...

Now onto the author that you called illiterate... http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1795081/lilgenious

Seriously check her stories out, even though she only has written one Harry Potter story she has written others in different fandoms. Now when you read her stories tell me if you think they are illiterate.

Keep writing though:) I look forward to more.