I don't want to be the person that moans about this but... It has been awhile and the story looks so good, I was just wanting to ask whether you have gave up or not, or if you maybe rewrote it and I didn't notice.
I would really like to see this story continued because it has a brilliant plot and even from the small prologue you can tell that it will be well written.
Hope you come back to this story
---DB4L
P.S if you still want a beta I will be more than happy to do it.