Review for Break
(#) Moira 2006-01-31
gaah! what a price for poor kyo-kun to pay just to belong, well, somewhere. very vivid writing there. (ouch, ouch, ouch.) very intriguing, too. i'm wondering, does the gang have anything to do with the sohmas? and what's tohru's role going to be? can't wait for the update!
Author\'s Response: (laughs) I was actually thinking about the update for this story. Though, it's already up on fanfiction.net... actually Prologue to chapter two is up on there. Which I'm re-working on chapter one and chapter two is kicking in some serious gear, making up for the terrible sake for chapter one! (laugh) If that makes any sense. ^.^ (laughs) I had another author/reviewer to say the prologue is vivid. That's what I was trying for. I was sweating on the story actually. I appreciate your feedback! I do hope you'll stick around. ^.^ Thank you!