Review for Doll House [rewrite]

Doll House [rewrite]

(#) AgentKilljoy 2011-06-05

Welcome back!!!!!!! I am super excited that your back and continuing this and maing it better, (even though it great before.)

Author's response

my writing style has improved a lot. thats why im rewriting it. i hope to do it for all my stories, really, but we'll see :P
xoxo tabi