WOW! I am so glad you are back. This story is amazing. I love your attention to detail. It makes it so much more vivid in my mind. I'm glad Ray isn't as bad off as Frank and I'm really glad he didn't leave Frank behind. Now I can only hope Frank makes it. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I wonder who they will find next and what gruesome situation they will be in. Update soon. :)
Author's response
yeah this is probably one of threr or so stories ive done that i actually like and had fun writing so i figured since ive gotten a bit better at writing, id redo
i definitely wanted to add more detail but am also trying to watch it because ive been told before that i also overdo it at times :P
id say the worst of it is over, but, that depends on how you look at the next few chapters ;)
xoxo tabi