I did not guess that he was going to be immortal. I suppose I wasn't thinking of anything supernatural that would happen in here, I thought it was going to be normal. haha.
But I swear, when you wrote he was a powerful wizard, and with his looks, I thought of Howl, from howls moving castle. If you haven't seen the movie you should, its very cute and very original. I like your story, even with the grammar and spelling, so I think you'd be a great writer someday, keep up the good work.
Author's response
Haha^^ I'm glad you liked it:D I can't say I've seen the movie but I just look the guy up on google and I have to say, I like him better with black hair >.> hahaha! Even though I couldn't see Miles pull off the black hair! Haha! Thank you for reviewing:D MAY THE MUSIC BE WITH YOU!:D ~JS~