Review for Nuts and bolts

Nuts and bolts

(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-06-08

Steampunk... Wtf?
I had a feeling this was going to be about robots at the title... No idea it was going to be this awesome! Dude... (I honestly hate to say this) this reminds me of Panic! At The Disco. Just the whole machinery bit. Like... The Ballad Of Mona Lisa video like this. And now I'm rambling...
So this is the prolouge? It turned out well. I couldn't tell who was who, though, when it started out. Like... Was it Frankie or Gee? But then I thought how you just finished a Ferard with Gee as the dominant one, so might as well let Frankie have a go at it. Make Gee the shy one. Lovely xD Wonder how that smut's gonna turn out...
Update soon!

Author's response

Ahh I'm glad you like it xD For a second there I thought you were horrified :') And I completely agree! When I saw that video I nearly died of happiness cos' clearly that must mean P!ATD like steampunk, right? ... Right!? xD
Haha, I wanted to make everything a bit vague at first and not give too much away. But who says Gee's gonna be the sub ;) I have a feeling the smut is gonna be hella fun to write for this one xD