I loved it! Very dark. :) I felt like I was about to cry there for a second when Frank died. I actually normally don't cry when I read, no matter how sad or horrific. I've only cried at two stories (maybe three? I can't remember if I cried when I read Ghost Love Score but I might have.) I'm not sure if you thought about a whole buch of underlying messages when you wrote it but I kind of saw how it said he seemed average and normal and then how he took things that were beautiful and destroyed them, but all he wanted was a reason to be remembered, a legacy. Yeah, I didn't cry, but I almost did. Very good story.