Well, I'm definitely enjoying it! I'll admit to being a little distracted by one of the characters having a name similar to the male lead in Mary Poppins. I don't know if that's intentional, but it keeps jarring me out of the story and filling my head with images of Dick Van Dyke (which I doubt is your aim! Although it does reference another PATD video).
But, names aside, it is an interesting tale that is slowly (but not too slowly) unfolding. As a good writer, you are getting people to read several chapters despite no cliffhangers. That's pretty impressive actually.
Sas x
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I'm surprised that I've never replied to this. That crappy of me.
I see what you mean about the dame similarity. =) Some of the names of the characters are actually characters from an group of entertainers called the League of STEAM that performed as extras and worked as steampunk consultants for the music video. =) I've actually met "Crackitus Potts" and many other members in real life.