Review for Hero (Frerard)

Hero (Frerard)

(#) afabulouskilljoy 2011-06-22

I love the concept for this story but I just don't know if it is written right. I know this was written ages ago but you should so start writing again.

The things Gerard were telling Frank should have been more emotional. But that's just my opinion and I'm sure you are a much better writer now than you were then.

xox J