You are going to have (five, add three... damn maths...) Nine! You will be writing nine stories in total... and I am going to read them all. =)
I knew it! I knew you were going to kill someone and yet it was still upsetting!
And I bet that in the next chapter someone else dies. Maybe Brendon commits suicide because he doesn't have Ryan, or maybe Spencer dies because from something. Oh, that would suck because then both Jon and Brendon would be alone... you wouldn't be that heartless, would you? Guess we'll find out in the next two chapters. Can't wait!
Yes, I think it added to the story nicely to have that part in. Job well done =)