Review for Auditons

Auditons

(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-06-27

Killjoy name: Twisted Poison (real name is Rosie)
Age: 14 (but you can change that to a more suitable age)
Special ability: Invisability and can see the future
Colour of ray gun: black with red paint splattred on it to look like blood
Appeance: 5'6, Dyed red, long straight hair, massive scar across right eye but covers it up wiyh her fringe, hazel eyes with green bits, chalk white foundation, tons of black eyeliner, nose stud, lip stud, 5 piercings in each ear, "FoREVer" tattooed on left wrist, a guitar on fire tattooed on upper right arm, a wedding ring tattoed on, "Bookworm" tattoo like frank cause she has a secret crush on him.

Clothes: Red motorbike jacket, black skinnie jeans, red knee high high heeled boots, hides gun inside boot
Personality: Shy around people don't know very well, but once i get to know them i can't stop talking, random, hyper, funny, really good fighter (i'm one grade off a black belt at tae kwon do), really good shooter

Backstory: Ran away with her cousin, when dracs got her family, her sister is autistic and korse used her for experiments, cousin got shot by korse right in front of her, travels alone, won't tell anyone about how she got her scar (you can decide how i don't mind)

Good luck with your story sorry if there are loads of spelling mistakes i'm writing on my phone :3

Rosie :)

Author's response

Thank youu :]