This is a amazing chapter, your writings NOT going down hill at all. Really i think its a fantastic story all together :D i like that this isn't all cliche and they kiss in like the second chapter. the way you describe emotions and the pain Gerard is going through..its just so beautiful and realistic. I have so much more to say about how brilliant this story is but i'm doing this on my phone...at school...in a science test...that's how good this story is. Update when you can :)