I definately disagree with this being rated "trainwreck". I actually think this is one of the more well-written fanfictions on ficwad. I really enjoy this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
P.S. I really like the length of your chapters, mostly because I've taken to forcing my self to do crunches after each chapter and this story helps me put that off. ;]
Author's response
haha! good way to get exercise I guess :P
Thanks alot! it's just annoying when it's -1 trainwreck cuz then It doesn't show up on the browsing page... :(