You're 12?!! The writing in this is fantastic for anybody, let alone a 12 year old! I'm beyond impressed. The characters are as original as the plotline, the description is incredibly clean and there were only a few tiny mistakes I'm pretty sure you'll pick up on if you read it again but to be honest I'm not bothered about them. Brilliant work but I just have one question I need you to answer: did she just fuck a dead guy?