Review for Where the animals should go...

Where the animals should go...

(#) fueledbyPanic 2011-06-30

oh yeah this is just a suggestion but try to separate the story into a bit shorter paragraphs so it doesn't look so condensed. It also makes it easier to read. :)
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Author's response

ok, I will :D
(and again, thx for reviewing)