I liked it. I live in one of those rich kid towns and when I stopped being a christian I got bullied all the time. People destroyed my stuff, insulted me, through things at me, and just in general were horrid. Someone even said I was a member of a Miley Cyrus worshipping cult. Who the hell does that?? Baisically, eventually I got sick of it and I let them know I wasn't gonna take it anymore. If someone touched me I told them next time they did they'd end up in an emergency room. If they touched me again, I'd hit them, not in the face but just enough to get them to stop. I'm one of those people who can debate anything and always either win or tie. So when people started trying to insult me I'd debate it and win. I decided that I didn't need their approval and that I wouldn't let them hurt me. So I just ignored them and soon I was some poster child for rebbellion 'cause I wouldn't dress like them and because I could out debate the principle and the people in the office. By the time I started publicly fighting for gay rights people couldn't scare me out of it. So my 'being bullied' story ended well.
I think this short story you wrote would make a good story. I have to warn though, it reminds me a bit of the fan fic 'Happiness or Misery?'.