Lauren, I have one thing to say:
THAT WAS FUCKING WORSE AND MORE DISTURBING THAN THE ACCOUNTS OF TORTURE AND MEDICAL EXPERIMENTS THAT I'VE READ FOR THE GERMAN DEATH CAMPS OF WORLD WAR II!!!
I think what made it worse was that he fucking killed his brother.
Christ, and there were no gory details either. She gave you enough dialogue to really get the imagination going. Not to mention build up from the previous chapters!
Very good. Very fucking good. Amazingly written. Just whoa, people, whoa. Disturbing as fuck!
I tell you, I wasn't expecting that. I just got back from St. Augustine today and I'm like, I gotta go check FicWad for reviews and updates and such. I find this. Got my heart racing. Got my blood going. Whoa.
-Adnarim Smada