Review for Audition

Audition

(#) XxxFallenAngelXxxx 2011-07-09

I have a girl and a guy-two best friends.
age-whatever fits.
Name:Dakota Nyx (nyx means night dakota means friend or ally)
killjoy name: Toxic Rose-after her little sister Rose
looks like. Long straight black and red hair-red on top black underneeth. Pale,emerald green eyes. Average height/weight but very underdevelouped-no hips/breasts. Ears pierced twice on the lobes and the top part of one. Tounge, lip and belly button pierced. tattoo of a rose on her ankle, and on one wrist the word "Dakota" and on the other "Rose" Very self conscious of her looks and her best friend teases her about it sometimes but doesn`t mean it.
outfit. Scruffy ripped black jeans, worn over colourfull tights, black top with a bleeding red rose on it. A black wristband saying "fuck all authority", knee high studded black boots-in the left she keeps a knife.silver necklace with a "D" and an "R" on it-she and her sister were very close. Leather jacket with badges/patches on.
Ray gun.black with a bleeding rose on it to match top.
Personality. Takes a while to earn her trust but is a very loyal friend. Morbid, sarcastic, thinks worst of herslef and is very kind. Secretly loves her best friend but thinks its hopeless and dislikes love/thinks people in love are stupid. Random, butts into coversations and rarely starts one.
Past. parents worked for BL/ind and wanted her and her Rose to when they grew older. When she found out what Toxic Faith`s parents (also worked for `em) did to him, she ran away with him and Rose, but rose got killed. Blames herself and he blames himself.
anything else. She hates what she has become, she hates bl/ind and knows they need to be destoryed but hates killing. SHe handles it well though and acts as though it doesn`t bother her. Used to be a strict veggie but now will eat meat if there is nothing else available. She`l complain about it though.
Toxic Faith (guy and her best friend)
Real name-James but prefers jamie or jay.
age-anything that fits.
looks like:black shaggy hair that falls into his face, has dark blue streaks through it after Toxic Rose talked him into(forced) him to get it done. Lip pierced, toungue and ears pierced. Ears have been done of both sides multiple times. A lot of tattoos. Pale and covered in scars-worst is a huge cross carved into his back. It has never healed fully. HAs odd eyes that are slightly different colours-left is a blueish grey and the right is bluish green.
Outfit. Black scruffy jeans and an old band tee-anything like Iron Maiden or Mistfits ect. Black scruffy converse and a 2 wristbands with spikes. Leather jacket with patches on.
ray gun-red with "gothic" black cross on it-chose it cause he thinks it is kinda funny in a sick twisted way.
past. His parents hated him as he is Bi, not religous and never agreed with them. They hurt him and gave him the huge scar of a cross on his back to "teach him a lesson" When Toxic Rose his best friend found out, she, her sister and him ran awya but her sister Rose got shot.He blames himself. personality. Morbid, sarcastic, perverted sometimes, loves Toxic Rose but won`t tell her ever. He is eihter very sad/depressed or supper crazy/hyper happy. Has had a drink and drug pproblem and smokes heavily something Toxic Rose hates.Would die for his friends or anyone who was a good person even if he didnt know then well.
hope this helps, if you need any more info let us know. Good luck with the story
xoxodakota