This is good. i was sort of happy to see Frankies dad have a soft side. And it was to bad that Mikey had to interupt them. I would have liked to see... Read about Gee & Frank snogging! Haha
Sorry about your friend who moved away... I know how much that sucks. Just be sure that you stay in touch or in a few years, you.ll be kicking yourself
hehe, if more reviews get you to write quick, then here you go! i.m using my phone and it has a tendency to spam all the reviews i post, so this is your lucky day- if you dont minds having the same thing repeated 10 times or something lol
i think that the spaceing does make the page easier to read. and i hope that you have fun on your trip :]