(#) Haze 2011-07-13
Well, I'm behind to this party. But since I read it and am absolutely staggered, I figured I would tell you my thoughts. Like someone said above, that was all incredibly natural dialogue. Really. And it was all important. What really blew me away was how realistic it all was; it's so on the money, it could've been a transcription. Superbly done, really. I'm blown away.
-Haze