Wow.
Just... WOW.
I love this.
This story, it's... it's brilliant.
I can't believe no one thought of this before! Frerard based on the Ghost Of You video. It is PERFECT :D I love it. The way you describe everyone, the pain and the agony Gerard and Frank and Ray and Mikey suffer, it's just brutal. There are a few things thy annoyed me... little things. Like the fact that you didn't really get into describing vital points of the story. For example, Frank and Gerard having sex for the first time, or Mikey dying, and Alicia's loss. Those things. Little things, I assure you.
Also, just wondering as I only finished reading this yesterday, is this the final chapter? Or will there be more? I can't tell because it was only updated on Thursday. If this isn't the end, please update it soon, I'd love to read more of this! :D xo
Author's response
Your review made me so, so proud, if I may say so myself.
Honest feedback like yours is always great to get, it always helps one grow.
And I didn't feel all that comfortable in describing the sex scene - not yet at least - mainly because of some personal experiences I am still "processing" . Believe me, Alicia's loss will have an ENORMOUS place in the second part of this story, so stay tuned! :)
-xo J.