Wonderful. Amusing. Thoughtful. Realistic (that´s really hard to come by). You got me hooked there. I´m really digging the two-perspective thing on the same situation. It adds an extra layer of depth to the story and one can see that you´re really thinking things through before publishing them. (Can you teach me? ;))
Ryan´s reflective paragraph was highly entertaining.
At the risk of redundancy, update soon, please! (Good thing I have one last rating point.)
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frosted: you're reviews are enlightening and helpful and if you are the only person who likes this, we will continue just for you...