Review for Be My Hero

Be My Hero

(#) japulapu 2011-07-18

Great stuff. This is a great example of how you can write a good story without getting too intimate. Beautifully written and a swell ending. You connected the paragraphs well and there was a great flow of thought and emotion. Good transitions between scenes. I'm really impressed. Good on ya!

Author's response

Thank you so much! This is one of the nicest compliments I've ever gotten. I'm real glad you enjoyed it:)