Hey, to all of you readers out there who see this story, i am looking for outside opinions and ideas on where to go from here. it may take time to see the changes, but i am working on it, seeing as to how i write it then type it. any feedback would be much appreciated, whether you think it rockd or not, tell me what you thought and things that could make it better or things you think i did right. if you have ideas on where i could go from here, i will listen and welcome some outside sources, because i dont write for me, i write for all of you, too. so please give me somthin here.
thankx people
-Maxx_Night