Review for The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

The Potters and Dumbledore's Secret

(#) Nautilus 2006-10-07

briliant story so far. I love the depth. I have no idea, why people are not reviewing - to lazy i guess - but the story is brilliant. loke the unique AU. Luckly Sirius So Harry as a girl in 3 of the 4 houses. No one in Ravenclaw yet. (I don't see Ginny going annywhere besides Griffindor.)
i look forward to more for this story, to be repetative - its briiliant.
Look forward to seeing what Ravenclaw is like. Others writers just the coomon room seem like a library. But i hope you can add a house library + still have the love seats and couches.
How is harry with his magic, you mentioned pranks and he did get into ravenclaw, so he is not an idiot. I look forward to seeing what happens in clasess. What about Hermoine. I like the Ron bashing (its subtle, but still there). cheers thats it for now. I look forward to he next chapters.

Author's response

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I've actually gotten the best reviewing reaction from this site, so I can't complain. Sex and violence sells, and that really doesn't come up in a PG-13-ish Gen story. Maybe when i get to the later years, it'll attract more, and I get a better writing reputation since this is my first. Weasleys = Gryffindor so no way Ginny won't end up there, I think maybe the only one I'd have been tempted to Sort differently would be canon Percy, but in this AU he's a tad less.. indifferent to his family. I put a bit of thought into the design of the Ravenclaw common room, I hope it was unique in style. Especially early on Harry is with everyone else on magic level, pranks and tricks he knows more without a wand because he'd been doing that for years, Nym couldn't use her wand when she came back from summer, so she could just show him what she got at Zonko's and such. Hermione and Ron will be sprinkled in sporadically, they'll get their spotlight during Halloween. I like the animosity right now, and it'll be there throughout, though Ron will be less.. rude to her after the Troll. I'm not a big angst reader, so I don't see Harry going through a lot of problems with girls.. I don't see that with Ron though, so he'll keep his teaspoon sized emotions, bringing some levity to the stories.