You are such a talented writer! There's something about your language that feels sentimental, on the rim of dark, and it suits this story perfectly. Keep writing, this tale is way too good to give up on :)
xo, Cecilia.
Author's response
Awww this comment made me really happy to read :) Im so glad that you think my writing style suits the story, because I try hard to make the atmosphere right and its great to know its paying off :D
And dw, this one im deffs continuing to write. Im actually super excited to get it really started - its gonna be just as much fun to write as read i think XD
Anyway, thanks a ton Cecilia