(#) pazed 2006-10-08
Very interesting and enjoyable. I like Maria. And Peach.
In Ch 5 did you really mean the Snape plot? Or the Thorne plot ... if it was Snape, Maria wouldn't have inherited.
I take it she didn't get a Hogwartys letter because Indigo magic is different.
I did think Harry really should have portkeyed out a bit sooner, but I guess I'll accept that he was dazed as you obviiously need things that way for your plot.
Look forward to more, thanks.