Review for Hiders

Hiders

(#) PartyPoison 2011-07-31

It would be something different, a good change to mix it up a bit.
Thanks for the thumbs up. I tried again on the riddle thing that was on this chapter. Again, I think I messed the order up but it should be similar-ish.

What an odd thought, I thought.
Rather than spinning,
I felt that the world was ending.
Today, I felt fantastic.

Anyways, I enjoy how you characterized Ryan in this story and I can’t wait to read more of it. Hope you update soon