I think that this shows insight into the teen mind: "Susan couldn't put her finger on exactly why she was annoyed with Ginny Weasley."
I was impressed with your novel interpretation of the Percy/Penelope relationship.
Author's response
Thank you for the compliment. Penny's always the one to lead Percy back to his family. Penny is always his source of redemption. Well how about Penny was always whispering in his ear how much they were holding him back or something like that? He isn't the first or the last person to be led to his doom by a girl in a short skirt.~Jim