WOOT! Yay us! It looks good to me!
But I swear, this story seriously looks way smaller on an actual website than double spaced and on paper.
Let's keep our fingers crossed for the contest! ::crosses fingers::
Author's response
yah i know!!! it kinda makes you freak out then cuz your's like "oh sht oh sht is it long enough??"
but we sent it in, and let's pray!