(#) dilly 2006-02-07
I love this story. I've read it a few times on other sites and archives, and I enjoy it every time. The details in particular make the story feel real. And the scene between Gaddes and Allen is perfect. You really got Allen's character down. The flashback-ness and little conversation with Chesta are also great, though they make me want more. laughs
I could probably go on pointing out every single thing I like about this story, but I'd just recount the entire thing. I'll just end with saying: Whenever I need a bit of a pick-me-up, this is one of the stories I seek out. It's absolutely great.