Around 5 chapters ago I would have siad you were running out of ideas. But ever since the running away thing started you have blown my mind. The tension, the suspense, everything, it's just great. It's very interesting, definately something to keep you at the edge of your seat. I love your sense of humour too, I really think you are a fantastic writer.
Author's response
I haven't run out of things to write yet, and I'm currently writing chapter 59. The story just progresses slowly, which I realize can be a bad thing. I'm sorry about that.