That was amazing. You wrote a sex scene without making it to inappropriate. I have never read anything like that. I can truly say it. It didn't sound dirty or wrong. It sounded beautiful. That was amazing! great Job! Please Update soon.
Author's response
Thanks! Yeah, iuno, I don't like using those kind of words, so I don't write them down? I have to try and find a way to imply it rather than say it (notice how I haven't used the word penis/any other word for that throughout the whole thing?)