WHOOT! more good fan-fic-ness :D lol
Imma wondering how the guys died... i might see why in the next chapter :) lol
One thing (if you don't mind me saying)... you might have to go back and check your gramma, and put in a few commas.. don't worry, im crap at gramma and spelling XP I usually have to spellcheck stuff on a Word Document before uploading it lol