I really love this story. I love the fact that you aren't rushing things, and you are making it realistic in the way the brothers are feeling about eachother. I mean, sure, I've never felt THAT way about MY brother, but I assume if i did, it would be similar to how you are writing it. Keep up the good work and continue please. :D
Author's response
Thank you a shit ton! I was hoping at least one person would notice that! :D Thank you for reading and reviewing. It was really awesome of you and I appreciate it a lot more than socially acceptable.