I wasn't exactly expecting the slash there - you should have put up a warning - but you managed to make it believable within their characters, which is tough to do when one of them is Edgar. Congrats!
Anyway, your insights into Edgar's mind were well-integrated into his character. Locke's too, obviously, but Edgar is done a lot less often and is probably more difficult. Good sketch!
Author\'s Response: Thanks! (... You mean the "R" rating wasn't enough of a warning? After "Locke interrupts?")