Wow...I never really comment on stories on this site because to be honest, I rarely find something to captivate my attention. Well, low and behold, here is your story and I can't tell you how much I wish there were a hundred more chapters available right now!
I really like what you have here...it's interesting because it's not really an "original" story idea in that it stems from something very close to reality, a fiction that we've all read before - the Frerard - and yet, there's something completely original about it...I'm completely in love with the character and relationship development...I can't wait to see if Frank is right about Bert or if it is just his jealousy rearing it's ugly head...
Please update soon!! I really love where you're taking this story!!
Cheers!