Review for Up Until a Minute Ago -REWRITE

Up Until a Minute Ago -REWRITE

(#) DangerousAmber 2011-08-26

I liked it but i sorta agree with letsdanceinthedark
BUUUUTTT it was cute c:


^-^ DangerousAmber ^-^

Author's response

don't worry, I sorta agree with letsdanceinthedark too. :) Do you have any suggestions for how it could be improved? That would be super helpful.