Personally I liked it. I liked it all.... BUT THAT CLIFFHANGER! Daaaang girl! I'm gonna be at work all day wondering now.
Author's response
Thank you! I'm glad. I was a little worried I'd lose reader's interest.
:D I'll try to have it ready for when you check online tonight, if you do then. Haha I know how hard being at work and wondering can be. (: