Very good chapter. It shows that you can write serious stuff just as well as comedy. I noticed you spelt the word 'scars' as 'scares'. The first time I just though it was an normal spelling mistake, but the second time I saw it I thought you did it on purpose. That was the only mistake I saw. I liked this chapter very much.
Author's response
Opps sorry about that. Thankyou hope you enjoyed it :D