Boy, wouldn't I love to get to know Frank Iero better like that! No, no, must resist, he is married and has kids. But this chapter was awesome. I love how you make each chapter so different from the previous one. I thought it was really well written, the entire thing. I moves very nicely.
Author's response
Thankyou very much, these reviews mean so much to me! I'm going to write another chapter tomorrow :)